Gem discussion – what should an essay look like on an exam?

This discussion board example is from our Odyssey final essay question that was given to you a week ahead of the test:

Give three examples of Odysseus’ heroism and two ways he is non-heroic. Discuss.

The attached file contains two student samples, one a gem, one not. What makes the gem a better essay?

Odyssey quiz discussion

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